27 Nov, 2018
2018-11-27 12:55:45 AM UTC
TOLKIEN, J.R.R. (1892-1973). Autograph manuscript, headed ''The Lord of the Rings III,'' being late revisions to Return of the King, book six, chapter two, n.p. [spring 1955].Note that the description says: "copy editors' markings in red, blue, black, and pencil". This is incorrect if the "copy editors" are meant not to include Tolkien himself. All the text is in Tolkien's hand, except the dark-blue-ink page and line indications, and the red initialed and dated note in the lower right-hand corner reading: "Corrected J
10-6-55".
In other words, all the corrections and comments made in red ballpoint, black ballpoint, and pencil are in fact in Tolkien's hand.
Carl
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27 Nov, 2018
2018-11-27 5:24:38 AM UTC
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28 Nov, 2018
2018-11-28 4:19:52 PM UTC
Recording here something I posted elsenet, regarding why this MS did not get sent to Marquette:
I believe what happened was this: Late in the process of reviewing galleys, Tolkien noticed a problem, or otherwise grew dissatisfied with distances pertaining to Mordor in RotK. I believe the query on the back is his, and the front is his attempt to answer the question he set himself. To do so, he first copied out passages citing distances from the galleys (in brown ink), and then worked out revisions to the distances and corresponding alterations to the text (in, chiefly, red ball-point). He then passed this sheet along with the galleys back to the printer, who made (and noted) the alterations Tolkien indicated. The sheet probably got dislocated in that process, and remained in the hands of the printer/publisher.
29 Nov, 2018
2018-11-29 2:30:37 AM UTC
The manuscript is evidently the corrections to Book VI, Chapter 2 Tolkien sent to Rayner Unwin on 14 April 1955 -- see Chronology for that date (2nd ed., p. 477). This was eight days after Tolkien returned the related part of the marked proofs (6 April) and two days after W.N. Beard sent the corrected proofs to the printer (12 April). Rayner probably would have handed the additional sheet on to Beard, who would have sent it in turn to the printer. It may be that it never was returned to Allen & Unwin, but retained by the printer, or taken as a souvenir by one of the printer's employees.
Christie's description assigns 'red, blue, black, and pencil' markings to 'copy editors'. My guess is that the red circles and check marks, and the blue page and line citations, were made by a compositor, or by a composition supervisor, to verify corrections, and that the person in charge there (JL) initialed and dated the completed work. All of the black ink is in Tolkien's hand, and I believe the penciled text is also.
Wayne
29 Nov, 2018
2018-11-29 3:51:00 AM UTC
Agreed, except that I think the red (ball-point) circles and accompanying superposed (ball-point) numbers (i.e. 1), 2), 3) etc.) were made by Tolkien, to indicate to the compositor which marginal note/correction corresponded to which location. The adjacent check-marks do indeed seem to be due to "JL", indicating the adoption of each alteration.
29 Nov, 2018
2018-11-29 12:12:02 PM UTC
Agreed, except that I think the red (ball-point) circles and accompanying superposed (ball-point) numbers (i.e. 1), 2), 3) etc.) were made by Tolkien, to indicate to the compositor which marginal note/correction corresponded to which location. The adjacent check-marks do indeed seem to be due to "JL", indicating the adoption of each alteration.
On reflection -- looking again at ink density and color -- I agree with your exception, though circling words would be typical in copy-editing or directing corrections. Anyway, a very interesting piece of working manuscript.
1 Dec, 2018
2018-12-1 4:28:55 PM UTC
I've now seen the pencilled query on the verso, and it does not look like Tolkien's hand. So it appears that someone else, possibly the printer, noticed the discrepancy in distances in the text and passed a query along to Tolkien, who then proceeded to address it.
4 Dec, 2018
2018-12-4 11:14:43 PM UTC