Books and other printed materials >> Help needed: checking paragraphs in different editions of The Hobbit
Thank you!
Interesting, that's the first time, as far as I know, I read about a (textual) change made in the 2nd impression.
Trotter wrote:
§ 12.037 A3a, p. 226, «"I have no idea at the momnet [...] » > A3c, p. +5, «"I have no idea at the moment [...] » This was corrected in the 2nd Impression 1937
Interesting, that's the first time, as far as I know, I read about a (textual) change made in the 2nd impression.
I noted this and another change in this thread https://www.tolkienguide.com/modules/n ... t_id=16701#forumpost16701
Trotter wrote:
I noted this and another change in this thread https://www.tolkienguide.com/modules/n ... t_id=16701#forumpost16701
Thanks for pointing this out, I missed that post; p. 31 (§ 01.116) would have been invisible to me (restored in 5th I presume?).
Of course they are different though: § 12.037 momnet>moment is a voluntary change to the typeset, while changed > chan ed is probably a defect.
Ugo Truffelli wrote:
Thanks for pointing this out, I missed that post; p. 31 (§ 01.116) would have been invisible to me (restored in 5th I presume?).
It was fixed in the 3rd Impression.
Trotter wrote:
Ugo Truffelli wrote:
Thanks for pointing this out, I missed that post; p. 31 (§ 01.116) would have been invisible to me (restored in 5th I presume?).
It was fixed in the 3rd Impression.
Thanks
Trotter LanceFormation Stu anyone else, do you have a 1st impression of the 1965 Ballantine paperback (A3f)?
I'm curious because Hammond records these:
(§ 01.031) p. 21 «"So you have got here at last!" what was what he was»
(§ 01.080) p. 27 «more fierce then fire»
(§ 03.031) p. 60 «uncomfortable palpitating»
(§ 03.034) p. 61 «their bruises their tempers and their hopes»
(§ 10.042) p. 192 «dwarves good feeling»
I have a 2nd & 5th impressions and my readings are
(§ 01.031) p. 21 «"So you have got here at last!" was what he was»
(§ 01.080) p. 27 «more fierce than fire»
(§ 03.031) p. 60 «uncomfortable, palpitating»
(§ 03.034) p. 61 «their bruises, their tempers and their hopes»
(§ 10.042) p. 192 «dwarves' good feeling»
I'm curious because Hammond records these:
(§ 01.031) p. 21 «"So you have got here at last!" what was what he was»
(§ 01.080) p. 27 «more fierce then fire»
(§ 03.031) p. 60 «uncomfortable palpitating»
(§ 03.034) p. 61 «their bruises their tempers and their hopes»
(§ 10.042) p. 192 «dwarves good feeling»
I have a 2nd & 5th impressions and my readings are
(§ 01.031) p. 21 «"So you have got here at last!" was what he was»
(§ 01.080) p. 27 «more fierce than fire»
(§ 03.031) p. 60 «uncomfortable, palpitating»
(§ 03.034) p. 61 «their bruises, their tempers and their hopes»
(§ 10.042) p. 192 «dwarves' good feeling»
Ugo Truffelli wrote:
@trotter LanceFormation Stu anyone else, do you have a 1st impression of the 1965 Ballantine paperback (A3f)?
I'm curious because Hammond records these:
(§ 01.031) p. 21 «"So you have got here at last!" what was what he was»
(§ 01.080) p. 27 «more fierce then fire»
(§ 03.031) p. 60 «uncomfortable palpitating»
(§ 03.034) p. 61 «their bruises their tempers and their hopes»
(§ 10.042) p. 192 «dwarves good feeling»
These match my first impression copy, yes.
Urulókë can I ask you to check in the 1st imp. also these?
§ 01.137 p. 38 «“Hear, hear!” said Bilbo, and accidentally said it aloud.»
§ 02.072 p. 49 «[...] quick!" they said, before Balin, who was wondering [...]»
§ 06.100 p. 113 «[...] was feeling full and comfortable again, and he felt he could sleep [...]»
§ 07.123 p. 132 «[...] Killed the Great Goblin, killed the Great Goblin!" [...]»
§ 08.041 p. 147 «[...] "somebody" meant Bilbo. They chose him because to be of any use [...]» (no punctuation after "him")
§ 08.070 p. 152 «[...] And hark to the singing and the harps!"» (double " and not single ')
§ 08.126 p. 163 «[...] he kept on muttering and chuckling to himself.»
§ 09.041 p. 176 «[...] old slowcoach is late," said another. "I have no wish to waste [...]»
§ 09.064 p. 181 «[...] down the stream to Lake-town. Bilbo sneezed again. [...]»
§ 10.042 p. 192 «[...] the thought of the dragon, and he had besides a shocking cold. For three days [...]»
§ 14.042 p. 241 «[...] hastened now down the river to the Long Lake. [...]»
§ 15.010 p. 244 «[...] they hand on their wisdom to their children. [...]»
§ 17.040 p. 265 «[...] the wind, it came from the North, like a vast cloud of birds [...]»
§ 17.049 p. 267 «It was a terrible battle. The most dreadful of all Bilbo's experiences [...]»
§ 01.137 p. 38 «“Hear, hear!” said Bilbo, and accidentally said it aloud.»
§ 02.072 p. 49 «[...] quick!" they said, before Balin, who was wondering [...]»
§ 06.100 p. 113 «[...] was feeling full and comfortable again, and he felt he could sleep [...]»
§ 07.123 p. 132 «[...] Killed the Great Goblin, killed the Great Goblin!" [...]»
§ 08.041 p. 147 «[...] "somebody" meant Bilbo. They chose him because to be of any use [...]» (no punctuation after "him")
§ 08.070 p. 152 «[...] And hark to the singing and the harps!"» (double " and not single ')
§ 08.126 p. 163 «[...] he kept on muttering and chuckling to himself.»
§ 09.041 p. 176 «[...] old slowcoach is late," said another. "I have no wish to waste [...]»
§ 09.064 p. 181 «[...] down the stream to Lake-town. Bilbo sneezed again. [...]»
§ 10.042 p. 192 «[...] the thought of the dragon, and he had besides a shocking cold. For three days [...]»
§ 14.042 p. 241 «[...] hastened now down the river to the Long Lake. [...]»
§ 15.010 p. 244 «[...] they hand on their wisdom to their children. [...]»
§ 17.040 p. 265 «[...] the wind, it came from the North, like a vast cloud of birds [...]»
§ 17.049 p. 267 «It was a terrible battle. The most dreadful of all Bilbo's experiences [...]»
25 Jan, 2022
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2022-1-25 12:57:02 AM UTC
Edited by Urulókë on 2022-1-25 5:54:45 PM UTC
Edited by Urulókë on 2022-1-25 5:54:57 PM UTC
Edited by Urulókë on 2022-1-25 5:54:57 PM UTC
2022-1-25 12:57:02 AM UTC
§ 01.137 p. 38 «“Hear, hear!” said Bilbo, and accidentally said it aloud.»
- Same
- Mine has "Before".
- Same
- Mine has "great" at that second occurence here.
- Same
- Mine has a double quote, which matches the double quote at the beginning of the paragraph.
- Same
- Same
- Same
- [...]and he had beside a shocking..." (no "s")
- Same
- Same
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- Same